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Dennis Ruffing's avatar

I hope you smiled when you wrote this line, for it sure deserves it.

"Tears glistened, the presence of memory"

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R. H. Snow's avatar

I actually cried at the end 💖

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Carl R Williams's avatar

Nicely done. I much enjoyed it.

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R. H. Snow's avatar

Thank you so much Carl! I had fun writing it!

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Skip's avatar

WOW!!

Love your stuff

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R. H. Snow's avatar

Thank you so much Skip!

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WFSL_TheFossil's avatar

Great story! Brings to mind the Johnny Cash version of the song Lorena. Thank you.

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R. H. Snow's avatar

I am a great fan of the illustrious Johnny Cash - what a wonderful song!

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